Showing posts with label week 4. Show all posts
Showing posts with label week 4. Show all posts

Monday, September 19, 2016

Feedback Focus

Focus technique one was my favourite. I actually already use this technique. I always find it hard for me to stay focused while reading, my mind always wonders to other things so reading out loud usually helps me stay on task a bit better. I also like to pretend I am reading to another person which helps me because I really have to try to portray the story in a way someone would understand and be interested in. I've found that this method works best for me. 

I thought the second technique was really unique. I think if I combined it with the first technique it may really be beneficial for me. Note-taking is also something I have struggled with in the past. I have a hard time picking out what is REALLY important to jot down. But just jotting down thoughts you have while reading is a great idea. I think this technique could be very helpful to me down the road with reading assignments. 

I didn't like the last technique as much as the other two. Being timed usually doesn't help me. I get anxious and end up wondering how much time I have left instead of focusing. I'm not the fastest reader so I would end up trying to beat the clock rather than really honing in and focusing on the material I'm reading. Overall, the first technique seemed to work best for me. They are all great ideas for ways to stay focused, and I know I need to learn to stay on task more!


Thursday, September 15, 2016

Story: The Lion King Ramayana



It was at the brink of sunrise when Rama reached Ravana's kingdom, he and Lakshama moved with stealth through the tall grass of the Savannah. Shadows were cast over his land even as the sun broke the horizon. They could see Ravana's lair in the distance, where Rama hoped Ravana was holding his one true love, Sita. Ravana had always been jealous that Rama had acquired his fathers kingdom and not him. Since Ravana was the kings brother he had expected to rule the kingdom once he passed. But instead the kingdom was handed down to Rama. Because of his jealousy he had taken the one thing that meant the most to Rama, his queen Sita. After traveling through the heat without much water for two days Rama and Lakshama had finally reached their destination. Though Ravana had the hyenas on his side- Rama had every animal in the Savannah on his side. 

As they neared the lair they heard the chatter and hysterical laughter of hyenas. They couldn't be seen or else they would alert Ravana and their entire sneak attack plan would be ruined. So they made sure to walk very carefully- focusing on each step, just as when they stalked their prey. Finally they had reached the rock formation. Rama placed one paw on the rock and began to climb up towards the lair. That is when they were spotted by Ravana's little minions. They began screaming up to Ravana, "Ravana Ravana your nephew has come to take back his wife! Wake up you must stop him!"
That is when he saw her. Sita ran out of the lair and looked down at Rama, eyes wide with terror and hope. She let out a roar of relief and Rama began to climb faster. Ravana had her shackled to his lair so she couldn't escape. Rama reached her and began to bite at her shackles trying his hardest to release her from them when out of the shadows came Ravana. His shaggy black mane hung over the scar on his left eye. He dangled a key in his claws, "Aw... the brave hero is here to save the love of his life. Isn't that sweet?" the hyenas cackled all around them. "Let her go Ravana and I will leave you be," Rama snarled through his huge white teeth. "Did you think it would be that simple sweet nephew?" They were now face to face, yellow eyes wide baring their teeth at one another. "Go on, hit me. You won't hit your dear uncle, you're too weak," Ravana taunted Rama. "Lakshama, protect Sita," Lakshama nodded and did as his brother wished. 
"I didn't come here for a fight Ravana," Rama said as they circled one another on the rock. "Oh, I know you didn't, after killing your father I know it would be hard for you to have to blame yourself for another family member's death..." Ravana smirked. Rama roared into Ravana's face waking up all the animals in the Savannah. He launched himself forward and ontop of Ravana. They went tumbling, claws and teeth meeting fur and skin- off of the rock and into the tall grass below. Rama was on top a mouthful of Ravana's mane in his mouth. Ravana slapped him across the face, catching his left eye with his massive claws. Rama roared in distress. Ravana was now on top blood gushing from his forehead into his eyes. He had his paws pressed into Rama's chest and his teeth sunk into Rama's left paw. Sita watched from above screaming for Lakshama to help him. Lakshama could not leave his sister-in-laws side, he had made a promise to protect her. Rama heard Sita's cries from above and with his vision blurred shoved Ravana off of him. He charged him and grabbing him by the neck and pressing him into the earth. Ravana began choking and laughing, he hissed through the pain... "You won't kill me Rama. You're too weak." Rama looked up and they were surrounded by hyenas. They had all realized one thing, Ravana was not who he said he was. He had promised them he would rule the kingdom one day and that they would be with him on his rise to king. They were all closing in, hysterical laughter echoing from all around. Rama let go of Ravana and said, "You're right, I'll let them do it instead." They parted to make room for Rama to walk through and then closed the circle on Ravana. Rama limped slowly back up to the lair where Lakshama and Sita were perched watching as he heard Ravana's screams quiet until the only sound was of snapping jaws and ripping skin. He knew it was over.
When he reached Sita, Lakshama had already freed her from the shackles. She cried, "I thought I was going to lose you, I was so helpless up here I'm so glad yo-" Rama interrupted her. "Sita, you have been living with my uncle. I know his deceitful ways and I cannot trust that he did not take advantage of you." "...but Rama i would nev-" "It does not matter, we are through. I have saved you, you are free. You may go now." Sita looked at him puzzled. "Wait," she said. She roared to the heavens and Rafiki appeared, "Rafiki, Rama is worried I have betrayed him, please prove to him that I am still pure and that we can still be together." Rafiki cracked a coconut and slathered it across Sita's forehead. He looked at Rama, "If she is impure, the dust I spread across her forehead will turn red. If she is still pure it will stay a golden color like her fur," Rafiki let the dust slip through his fingers and onto her forehead, it remained a golden color. Rama let out a sigh of relief and embraced his wife. He purred, "I won't ever lose you again, I am so sorry Sita." She smiled and kissed his cheek, "It is okay my love, let's go back  to the kingdom and share with everyone the good news of my return." Rama, Lakshama, Rafiki and the hyenas all made the trek back to the kingdom to celebrate Sita and Rama's love. 

Author's note:
Well, this was a bit of a stretch really, I was just trying to find a new way to manipulate this part of the Ramayana and make it my own. As I hope you figured out, it is based off The Lion King. I don't know how that idea popped into my head, but I thought changing them into animals would be fun and then somehow I ended up with The Lion King! I hope you all enjoyed reading it!

Narayan's Ramayana, link to Reading Guide A.

Wednesday, September 14, 2016

Reading Notes: The Ramayana Part D

Wow, what an intriguing ending. This epic was embellished with so much imagery and action which made me truly love it. I LOVE the Interlude. I read someone's story they wrote based on the interlude about how Sita had to prove herself to Rama by stepping into the fire and I loved the twist they put on it. I would like to work my magic on this part as well and see what I can come up with. I think there are so many details leading up to that moment and the suspense build up is off the charts. I also feel her walking through a fire is so poetic, just goes to show the crazy things people will do for the ones they truly love. I found it so odd that Rama spent all that time and effort to save Sita just to tell her they could never live together again, however I am glad they ended up together. In the student story I read Sita actually left Rama since he doubted her. It was very empowering and I liked that alternate ending. I need to brainstorm some more but I think maybe I could add an even bigger twist to this part of the story!! I think I will do a portfolio for the class project so I'm eager to write a strong story for my portfolio this week!! 

I thought this picture showing Sita's fire test was really neat. I love the colors used here. 
Narayan's Ramayana, link to Reading Guide A.